Abbigail Rugel
Rasheda Young
November 18, 2015
Essay Thesis.
1. Because college students under the age of 21 have proven to be unable to drink responsibly, the legal drinking age should not be reduced therefore, college campuses should promote responsible drinking to the underaged to prevent violent and traumatic incidents.
2. Therefore the legal age should not be reduced to 18 because of the problematic chaos that occurs with underage drinking especially on college campuses.
Thank you for posting your thesis Abbi.
ReplyDeleteIn thesis number 1, you write that "college campuses should promote responsible drinking." Can you make the audience more specific? In other words, when you write "college campuses" *who* on the college campus should do this?
In recent news, Rutgers University was in the paper for problems their students have with underage drinking. The *administrators* took an aggressive stance. I wonder how this might work in relation to your topic?
Also, you suggest that the college campus should promote responsible drinking to the under-aged. Isn't that illegal?
ReplyDeleteWhat I mean is that they should prepare the students for when they are of age. I need to work on making that more clear in my thesis
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